Being deeply loved by someone gives you strengh, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.
请问 老师，这两句话能否改成：
Being loved deeply by someone gives you strengh, while loving deeply someone gives you courage.
程度副词修饰动词的通常规律是：
1. 副词一般放在动词之后（少数状况也可放在动词之前）；
2. 若动词带有宾语，则副词一般放在宾语之后（但将副词插在动词之宾语之间的状况是非常罕见的，原则上不可同意）；
3. 若动词为被动形式，则副词一般放在助动词be与过去分词之间（有时可也将副词放在过去分词之后，但比较少见）。
基于以上“通常规律”，所以我觉得：Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage. 才是最一般的表达，句子意思是：被一个人深深爱着会叫你坚强，而深深地爱一个人会叫你勇敢。
至于Being loved deeply by someone gives you strength, while loving deeply someone gives you courage. 我觉得原则上不可同意，由于loving deeply someone中的deeply插在了动词之宾语之间。
