个英文网站面向中学生征稿请你写一篇英语稿件，介绍中秋节及这个节日里的主要活动。
1. 写作要素：它是中国的传统节日之一;
2. 家人团聚;
3. 赏月、吃月饼;
4. 还有旅游、访友等其他活动。
注意：1.词数100左右;
2. 可以适合增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
【参考范本】
The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunarcalendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit togetherand eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling andvisiting our relatives or friends。
老师点评：
任务达成：完整完成了介绍中秋节的任务，覆盖了所有内容。
单 词：用广泛的词语来表达，其中有fall on, lunar calendar, enjoy great popularity, celebration, in addition, tradictional,range, relative等高级词语。
语法结构：用了多种多样的语法结构，有as+名词作状语的结构，有has been enjoying目前完成进行时态， no matter引导的让步状语从句，有what we love most的主语从句，和它后面的定语从句，with+名词的状语，-ing的非谓成分等等。
连 接: 用了一些连接词语或短语： As, Usually,in addition to，但整体的行文推进还不够流畅，没分段，句与句之间的连接不够自然，扣1分。
整体得分：24-25分。
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The Mid-Autumn Festival
TheMid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunarcalendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity for its celebration of family reunion. Usually,no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the festival. The moon thatnight looks the brightest in the whole lunar month.
What we love most in the festival is the time we get together to enjoy the full moon, which looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit,sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends。
